Question

請根據提示內容，以“My best friend”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文.(表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。)

內容要點如下：

1.最好的朋友是湯姆；

2.長得又高又瘦，戴著小而圓的眼鏡；看起來很聰明；

3.慷慨大方且樂于助人，經常在公交車上給別人讓座。

4.酷愛體育，擅長打籃球；每周二下午練習打籃球；姚明是他的偶像(hero)；

5. 長大后……(2-3句)

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Answer 1

I have a friend. His name is Tom. He is my best friend. He is both tall and thin. He uaually wears small and round glasses. He looks quite clever. Tom is generous .He is willing to share things with his friends .He is always ready to help people. For example, he often gives his seat to others on the bus. He loves sports very much and good at basketball. He practices playing basketball every Tuesday afternoon. His hero is Yao Ming. He says he is going to be a professional basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up . He wants to play basketball for national team. He believes his dream will come true one day.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以My best friend為題，根據所給要點寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據所給要點可知，本文主要以一般現在時態書寫，可以用第三人稱。一點要注意把每一個要點都表達出來，不要遺漏任何一個，并且要圍繞主題適當發揮，寫兩三個有關長大以后的句子。

【亮點說明】該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。①He is both tall and thin.② He is willing to share things with his friends .③ He is always ready to help people.

考點：提綱作文。