Question

 假如你是張宏�！吨袑W生》雜志社的王主編給同學們在網上發了個郵件。他想了解你的學校以及你在校學習、生活的情況。請仔細閱讀該郵件，然后給王主編寫一封回信，回答他在郵件中提出的所有問題。信的開頭和結尾已經給出，且不計入總數內。注意信中不出現你的真實姓名和班級。
要求：內容完整，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫工整，80詞左右。

Dear friends, We are doing a survey about your school life and we really need your help. Please answer some questions. What’s your name? Where do you study? How do you like your teachers and your school? What do you think of the subjects? Which one is your favorite? Why? What do you often do with your friends after class? What do you think of your school life? How can you make your school life better? Please write soon! Yours,   Mr. Wang

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. My name is Bob. I study at No. 14 Middle School, which is not only modern but also beautiful. The teachers in my school are so kind and hardworking that I love them very much. Of all the subjects, I like English best, because I want to be a volunteer at 2008 Olympics. My favorite sport is basketball. My friends and I used to plat it together after class, but now we hardly ever have time to have fun. Every day we have too much homework to do.
Although my school life is a little boring now.  I know I should work hard at my lessons. As a teenager, it is my duty to try my best to deal with each challenge in my school life.
I hope this letter can help you

試題分析：本文要求閱讀該郵件，然后給王主編寫一封回信，告訴他你的學校以及你在校學習、生活的情況。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: not only modern but also beautiful.既現代又漂亮。,My friends and I used to plat it together after class,下課后我和我的朋友一起玩，As a teenager, it is my duty to try my best to deal with each challenge in my school life.作為一個十幾歲的青少年，盡我最大的努力去處理我的學校生活的每一次挑戰是我的職責等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.