Question

14．假如你是紅星中學(xué)初三畢業(yè)生，三年初中學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)以"My Middle School Life"為題寫一篇短文．簡略將母校做一下介紹，重點(diǎn)回顧自己的中學(xué)生活，并簡要說明你將如何回報(bào)母校．
要求：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
2．詞數(shù)不得少于80．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure回首過去，我經(jīng)歷了成功的喜悅或失敗的痛苦．這是一個(gè)現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的句子，go through經(jīng)歷，the joy of…的快樂，喜悅，the pains of…的痛苦．
高分句型二：Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study老師對(duì)我們很友好，對(duì)我們學(xué)習(xí)總是很嚴(yán)格．本句使用兩個(gè)固定短語：be friendly to sb．對(duì)某人友好；be strict with sb．對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格．

解答 My Middle School Life
        How time flies!Three years passed in a blink．（總體說明三年初中的時(shí)間之快）Lots of memories left in my head．Teachers，classmates，hard work and above all friendship stay in mind．Looking back，I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure（高分句型一）．Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study（高分句型二）．Classmates and friends help me so much．With their help I've made great  progress．But I'm a careless boy．And I always make mistakes which can be avoided．（回顧自己的中學(xué)生活）Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings．As it is said，"It is not our abilities that show what we truly are，it is our choice．"The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future．And I believe I can do it．I think this is the best return to my middle school．（展望未來的生活及自己的決心，這就是對(duì)母校最好的回報(bào)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫作時(shí)，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．