Question

近年來廣場舞越來越流行。在公園、小區甚至一些空地旁常能看到跳舞的人們。上周, Helping Hands Club進行了一項問卷調查。請你根據調查結果寫一篇英語短文，并談一談對此事的看法。

贊 成：● 是健康的生活方式, 跳舞能鍛煉身體

● 可以結交有共同愛好的朋友

● 人人都有權利(right)在廣場和空地等公共場所開展活動

反 對：● 音樂聲音太大，影響附近居民的正常生活

● 媒體報道噪音擾民引起打架傷人

你的看法：● ……

要求：1. 所寫內容必須包含以上信息，可適當發揮。

2. 自擬你對廣場舞現象的看法，不少于兩點。

3. 文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

4. 語句通順，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

5. 文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名。

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Square dancing is becoming popular and popular in recent years. It is often seen at squares, parks or even open spaces. Last week Helping Hands Club made a survey on square dancing.

Some people thought everyone has the right to have activities in public places. It is a good way to take exercise. What’s more, they can make more friends who share the same hobby. But other people disagreed. They complained that noisy music had a bad effect on people’s study and life though square dancing is a kind of healthy lifestyle. Some newspapers said fights happened between citizens and dancers because of this.

In my opinion, it is necessary to take actions to solve the problem. Dancers should turn down the loudspeakers and should not dance till too late at night. If people can understand each other, we will live in a happy and harmony life.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達應根據提綱內容正確地表述贊成反對的觀點，并且要正確闡述自己對此事的看法。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，先表達贊成的觀點，再表達反對的觀點，最后表達自己的觀點，結構清晰。同時文章銜接連貫，運用了what’s more, but, in my opinion等連詞進行銜接。同時，本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:It’s a good way to do, between…and…, take actions等。文章還運用了定語從句。

考點：提綱作文。