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8．春天是個萬物復蘇，春暖花開的季節，各個學校都組織學生出去春游，九年級的學生是否也應該參與其中？有的學生認為九年級學生學業繁忙，不應該參加春游；而有的學生認為九年級學生更要注意勞逸結合，應該參加春游．結合以下表格信息，選擇你的觀點并闡述理由．

Pros	Cons
◆relax oneself ◆learn to look after oneself ◆be more connected to the teachers ◆…	◆a waste of time ◆feel tired after it ◆may have safety problems ◆…

注意：（1）選擇其中一個觀點，將標題補充完整；
（2）理由必須包括表中你所選擇的觀點的相應內容，可適當發揮；
（3）文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息；
（4）詞數：80～100．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．

We  take part in the school trip．（should/shouldn't）In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip．In my opinion．                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
1，Firstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．if 引導的條件狀語從句，是復合句；此句還用了被動語態，be given；此句還用了which 引導的非限制定語從句．
2，Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．此句用了結構it is+形容詞+for sb  to do 對某人來說干…是…的．

解答 We   should    take part in the school trip．
In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip． Some people think we should not take part in it．   But in my opinion，I think we should take part in the school trip．Firstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．＜高分句型＞And a long-time study will only make us tired and stressed．Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．＜高分句型＞Thirdly，we could be more connected to both our teachers and our classmates．We may understand each other better through this trip．Finally，the last school trip for us could be our everlasting memory．
  In a word，we should go and have fun!

點評 寫圖表半命題作文時，我們最好不要漏掉其中的要點，行文注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，適當寫幾個復合句比較用易得高分，但同時注意，適當用幾個人連接詞，使文章顯得有層次感，同時，在作文完成的時候注意檢查，修改，如果有條件的話最好能夠先打個草稿，再抄到答題紙上，方能成為一篇好文章