Question

12．關于書籍和讀書的名言很多，如，書籍是人類進步的階梯，書籍是開啟智慧之門的鑰匙，讀書使人明智等等．請你以為題，根據要點提示和要求，用英文寫一篇短文，談一談讀書的好處或讀書的體會．
要點提示：1）讀書可以使我們調節或放松心情；
2）讀書可以提使我們更智慧；
3）…（請自擬最少兩條，順序自己調整）；
注意：1）詞數不少于80．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
2）可適當增加細節，使行文通順連貫、邏輯合理．
Books are an important part of our life．
Books are important in our daily life．Now let me tell you some reasons why I love reading．
Firstly，books are our best friends．Secondly，reading is a good way to relax ourselves．Thirdly，reading is also a great way to improve reading and writing skills．We will be able to write better if we read a lot．Fourthly，reading increases our knowledge．We can know about the history of the world．And we can learn the latest news in the world without going out．And we can have great fun reading books．I think reading a good book is just like talking with a great person．So let's read more good books from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：We will be able to write better if we read a lot如果我們讀了很多書，我們就能寫得更好．這是由if引導的條件狀語從句，要遵循主將從現的原則．
高分句型二：I think reading a good book is just like talking with a great person我認為讀一本好書就像和一個偉大的人交談一樣．這是一個省略了that的賓語從句；reading a good book動名詞短語充當后面賓語從句的主語；talk with sb．與某人交談．

解答 Books are important in our daily life．（開篇點題） Now let me tell you some reasons why I love reading．
Firstly，books are our best friends．Secondly，reading is a good way to relax ourselves．Thirdly，reading is also a great way to improve reading and writing skills．We will be able to write better if we read a lot．（高分句型一）Fourthly，reading increases our knowledge．We can know about the history of the world．And we can learn the latest news in the world without going out．And we can have great fun reading books．I think reading a good book is just like talking with a great person．（高分句型二）（具體介紹讀書的好處）So let's read more good books from now on．（得出結論）

點評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句．（3）進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句．（4）適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．