Question

9．假如你是Dave，昨天你收到了你的好朋友Jim的郵件，Jim 在郵件中向你傾訴了他的煩惱：
1．父母不了解自己，并且偷看自己的日記，于是他同父母吵架；
2．自己喜歡踢足球，但是花費時間太多，以至于成績下降，感覺非常苦惱；
3．晚上熬夜寫作業，第二天早上上課非常困．
請你根據Jim在郵件中提及的問題，回復一封郵件給他提一些建議．
注意；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．詞數：90詞左右
Dear Jim，
I'm glad to hear from you and I'm sorry to hear that you're in trouble with your parents and study．
                                                             
Good luck!
Yours
Dave．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，I think you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings．
句中"you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings"為賓語從句．句中使用短語有：had better do sth 最好做某事；talk with sb about sth 跟某人談論某事．這句話意為：首先，我認為你最好多跟你的父母談談你的生活和感受．
高分句型二：
The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you．
句中"why they read your diaries"為定語從句，修飾"reason"．句中短語有：want to do sth 想做某事．這句話意為：他們讀你日記的原因可能僅僅是想更多地了解你．

解答 Dear Jim，
I'm sorry to hear from you and I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study．As your best friend，I'd like to give you some advice．（開篇點題）First，I think you'd better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings．【高分句型一】The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you．【高分句型二】If you talk with them，they won't worry about you．Then，make sure that you play football properly．Don't spend too much time on it，or you'll have less energy to study．Last，why not do your homework as soon as you get home after school and go to bed before nine？（我的建議）I hope what I say can help you．（表達祝福）
Good luck!
 Yours，
Dave．

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