Question

請以“Sharks in Danger”為題，設計一張海報來呼吁大家從自身做起，保護鯊魚。
要點提示：
人類吃魚翅導致大量鯊魚被捕殺
我們應以身作則，拒絕吃魚翅
告誡人們；“沒有買賣，就沒有殺戮”
提示詞匯：shark fin 魚翅 become extinct瀕臨滅絕
No trading,no killing “沒有買賣，就沒有殺戮”
要求：語意通順，邏輯清晰。70詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數）
Sharks in Danger
Today,more and more sharks are being killed.
 
Let’s do something together to save the sharks.

Answer 1

Sharks in Danger
Today ,more and more sharks are being killed .Sharks are facing the problem of becoming extinct.Why do people kill them? One of the biggest problems is their fins.In many countries ,shark fin soup is an expensive dish.Fishermen keep hunting sharks for their fins and sell them for money .It’s not a story ,it’s true !So,what should we do? Don’t eat shark fins and tell the truth to our friends and families .Remember :No trading ,no killing.
Let’s do something together to save the sharks!

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，本文所給材料要點清晰，要求明確，話題內容貼近生活實際。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地使用了多種句式，使文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些的固定句式和短語，如：keep doing、tell the truth、No trading ,no killing等，這為文章增色不少。學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。