Question

16．體育鍛煉能強身健體，它與人的身體健康密切相關．請結合你的實際情況寫一篇以"My favorite sport"為題，用英語寫一篇短文．
內容要求：1．想想喜歡哪些體育項目．
  2．談談你喜歡的原因．
  3．說說自己的實際活動情況．
（詞數：70詞左右．）

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Though there are different kinds of sports，swimming is my favorite雖然有很多種運動，但是我最喜歡游泳．
though引導的讓步狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
①It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents ②when I was five years old．當我五歲的時候和我的父母一起學習游泳是很激動人心的經歷．
①it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．
②when引導的時間狀語從句．

解答 My favorite sport
Though there are different kinds of sports，swimming is my favorite．【高分句型一】（喜歡哪些體育項目）It was a very exciting experience to learn swimming with my parents when I was five years old．【高分句型二】
Swimming is a really good sport．It makes me feel relaxed．This sport can make me stay healthy and strong，because I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming．（談談你喜歡的原因）
Before going to swim，we should pay attention to three points．The first is to make your body in a better state．The second is that do not eat too much．The last is that you'd better swim with some friends．These can help you stay safe and enjoy yourself．（實際活動情況）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．