Question

隨著社會的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物在我們的日常生活中成為一種流行的購物方式，根據(jù)下表提示，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的利與弊。
要求：1、語句通順流暢，書寫規(guī)范；
　　　2、包含提示內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3、詞數(shù)80左右。

Advantage	Disadvantage
便宜 24小時營業(yè)，方便，不用出家門 有更多的選擇	看不見物品，易受騙　 不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣

　　Shopping online is quite popular is our daily life now.                               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

One possible version：
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It has advantages but also has disadvantages.
The advantage of shopping online is convenient because the shops on the Internet are open 24 hours a day and the shoppers shouldn't wait in the line of people.
The disadvantage of shopping online is easy to de cheated because we can't see the goods. Also, we can't enjoy the joy of shopping with friends.
I think we can shop online if the things we want to buy are difficult to find and we can shop with friends if we want to spent free time.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以在寫作時，要尤其一般現(xiàn)在時的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)所給提示。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章條理清晰。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。很清晰的介紹了網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)及缺點(diǎn)。
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