Question

最近，你班開(kāi)展了一場(chǎng)以“my dream” 為題的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你就自身理想寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的演講稿。

提示： 1 what do you want to be ?( newsreader / reporter / scientist/ doctor/ teacher/ sportman…)

2. Why do you want to be a …?

3. How can you be a … in the future?

I want to be a ______ in the future

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I want to be a teacher in the future

I want to be a teacher when I studied in the first grade in the elementary school. The first time I saw a teacher teaches so many students, I thought it is the most greatness job. How greatness is a teacher! I decided to be a teacher in the future.

When I was in the fifth grade, I met an important man in my life, my teacher. He was a kind and special teacher. I was timidity until meeting him. He told me many things, and charged me with a class organizer. I have been more and more daring since I met him. Now I always miss him. I thank to his administrant very much.

I want to be a teacher in the future because I met many good teachers. I want to be as good as them. They gave me much administrant; I want to give much administrant to our children. Being a teacher is difficult now. Being a good teacher is more difficult. But I think I can do everything if I do my best!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

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