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母愛悄深，母愛無價;學會感恩，學會回報。某英語網站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語征文活動。請你根據下列思維導圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。

提示:1.短文應包括導圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明;

2.短文中不能出現真實的人名和地名。

3.詞數不少于80，開頭已給出:不計人總詞數。

My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother._______________

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My mother

We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經給出.本作文中給出的要點比較簡略,動筆前先要圍繞這些要點阻止材料，確定寫作內容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，不要偏離文章中心.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合文章要表達的主題,不能出現文章脫節問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。