Question

8．假如你是Su Yang，一個品學兼優的學生，英語成績非常優秀，在畢業之前決定與初一新同學分享自己的成功學習經驗．請根據下列提示幫助Su Yang寫一篇發言稿，對新同學提出英語學習的有益建議．

In Class	全神貫注聽講
	踴躍回答問題
	積極參與活動
	大膽練習口語
After Class	及時復習知識
	按時認真作業
	進行大量閱讀
	…

注意：
1．表達中必須包含所給要點，可適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2．詞數90左右．開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
3．表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名．
Hello，everyone，
I'm very glad to share my experience of English learning with you today．
                                             
And I hope you'll find the suggestions of some value．Thank you so much!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First of all，it's important to do your best in class首先，課堂上盡力是重要的．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
【高分句型二】
Go over what you have learned and complete your homework on time復習你所學過的，按時完成作業．
 what you have learned 為賓語從句．

解答 Hello，everyone，
I'm very glad to share my experience of English learning with you today．
First of all，it's important to do your best in class．【高分句型一】You should listen to the teacher carefully and try to answer questions actively．Remember to take an active part in any class activities，especially to practice spoken English bravely．（課堂上）
Learning English takes time，so you have to work hard after class．Go over what you have learned and complete your homework on time．【高分句型二】Do as much reading as you can，for it is a good way to build up your vocabulary．What's more，you can learn to keep diaries in English．（課下）
Different people have different ideas about how to learn English well，and I hope you'll find the suggestions of some value．Thank you so much!

點評 寫作時要注意一些幾點：
（1）應抓住文章中心，圍繞主題，根據提示列出要寫的信息要點．
（2）注意內容是否充實、積極和健康．
（3）注意文章的結構層次，要凸顯文章的主題．
（4）要注意語言規范，表達準確，選材造句都盡量使用學過、見過的語言材料．