Question

6．根據中文和英文提示，寫一段意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信．信的開頭和結尾已給出，其詞數不計入所要完成的回信內．請不要寫出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫李華，你的美國朋友Emily通過郵件想了解使你發生改變的人．請你談談她/他是誰，發生了什么令你改變的事，以及你的感悟．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】I have changed a lot since I became a middle schoolstudent．自從我成為一個中學生以后，我改變了很多．since引導時間狀語從句，主句用現在完成時
【高分句型二】I could hear my heart beating fast and I could hardly breathe．我能夠聽見我的心臟跳動得很快而且呼吸困難．hear sb．/sth．doing 聽見…正在做某事

解答 Hi!Emily，
    I'm glad to hear from you．
    I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student【高分句型一】．Linda is the person who has changed me．I did not like running．One day we had a relay race in P．E．class．I hesitated about whether to join in the game or not．Linda came to me and told me not to worry．Then I decided to join them．While running，I could hear my heart beating fast and I could hardly breathe【高分句型二】．Just when I wanted to give up，I heard someone cheering on me and found that it was Linda．I regained my strength and kept running to the finishingline．
   With Linda's encouragement and trust，I practiced running every day after school from then on．It is she who makes me believe that I have the ability to challenge myself to do something beyond my reach．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應該仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫． 根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；語言表達要符合英語習慣． 在平常的學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩．