Question

假如現(xiàn)在是晚上七點(diǎn)，你就是Tom, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)Tom 提供的下列信息， 寫(xiě)一篇描述Tom 一家人此時(shí)的活動(dòng)情況，文章不得少于50詞。

Father	read a newspaper
Mother	do the dishes
Grandparents	watch TV
Tom	do his homework
Rose	play with the cat

 

Answer 1

Hello! My name is Tom. I have a happy family. It is seven o’clock now, my family are all at home. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is doing the dishes. My grandparents are watching TV. Rose is my sister, she is playing with the cat. I am doing my homework.

解析試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作非常簡(jiǎn)單，首先說(shuō)明自己有一個(gè)非常幸福的家庭I have a happy family.然后說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在是晚上7點(diǎn)，家人們所做的事情，寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中注意在具體的某人點(diǎn)時(shí)間要用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致的情況，如表達(dá)祖父母在看電視時(shí)應(yīng)用My grandparents are watching TV.注意這些細(xì)節(jié)，即可很好的解答出來(lái)。
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