Question

5．親愛的同學們，作為00后的初中生，你們是我們祖國的未來，但你們也有自己的優點和缺點．請以"We Are Post-00Students"為題寫一篇短文參加學校的英語作文競賽．請按照下表兩個方面進行客觀的描述，然后制定個人將來的目標和計劃．
注意事項：1.80詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2．文中不得出現真實姓名、校名等信息；
3．文章必須包括表格中所提供的主要信息，并作適當發揮．
We Are Post-00Students
As post-00students，we are the hope of our country．However，we also have our advantages
and disadvantages．
On the one hand，we have lots of advantages．Most of us are helpful．We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble．We're also active enough to be interested in new things．What's more，we're confident．We're sure we can do anything if we never give up．
On the other hand，we still have some disadvantages．Sometimes we get excited and angry easily．And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness．We think of ourselves more than others
My dream is to be one of the top students in my class．I believe I can realize my dream through hard work．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble別人有困難我們會盡力幫助．
if引導的條件狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness因為粗心我們總是犯同樣的錯誤．
because of 因為

解答 We Are Post-00 Students
As post-00 students，we are the hope of our country．However，we also have our advantages and disadvantages．
On the one hand，we have lots of  advantages．Most of us are helpful．We'll try our best to help others if they are in trouble．【高分句型一】We're also active enough to be interested in new things．What's more，we're confident．We're sure we can do anything if we never give up．（優點）
On the other hand，we still have some disadvantages．Sometimes we get excited and angry easily．And we often make the same mistakes because of carelessness．【高分句型二】We think of ourselves more than others．（缺點）
  My dream is to be one of  the top students in my class．I believe I can realize my dream through hard work．（將來的目標和計劃）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．