Question

13．假如你們英語老師要求寫一篇以 My weekend 為題的英語短文，介紹你上周末的活動．請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)的提示，完成老師布置的任務(wù)．

	上午	下午
星期六	做作業(yè)	和朋友一起購物，都買了一些衣服，又一起吃面條．
星期日	參觀動物園	看訪談節(jié)目

要求：1）根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2）首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．80詞左右．
My weekend
I had a great weekend．It was rainy on Saturday．
In the morning I stayed at home and did my homework．It was easy for me．In the afternoon，I went shopping with my good friends．We bought some new clothes for all of us．We had noodles together．
On Sunday morning，I visited the zoo with my good friends．We had a good time there．I watched a talk show on Sunday afternoon．It was educational，and I learned a lot from it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以My weekend 為題，介紹你上周末的活動．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．星期六；上午做作業(yè)；下午和朋友一起購物，都買了一些衣服，又一起吃面條．
2．星期日；上午參觀動物園；下午看訪談節(jié)目

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
stay at  待在…
go shopping 購物
buy sth for sb 給某人買某物
have a good time 玩得開心

【高分句型】
1．We bought some new clothes for all of us．
buy sth for sb 給某人買某物
2．We had a good time there．
have a good time 玩得開心
3．It was educational and I learned a lot from it
and連接的兩個并列句．

解答 My weekend
   I had a great weekend．It was rainy on Saturday．In the morning I stayed at home and did my homework．It was easy for me（上午做作業(yè)）．In the afternoon，I went shopping with my good friends．We bought some new clothes for all of us．【高分句型】We had noodles together．（下午和朋友一起購物，都買了一些衣服，又一起吃面條） On Sunday morning，I visited the zoo with my good friends．We had a good time there．【高分句型】（上午參觀動物園）I watched a talk show on Sunday afternoon．It was educational and I learned a lot from it．（下午看訪談節(jié)目）．【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．