Question

最近你校進(jìn)行了一次“說出你的煩惱（Speak out your worries）的調(diào)查活動，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和提示要求寫一篇英語短文，匯報調(diào)查結(jié)果并向老師和父母提出建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息

學(xué)生比例	煩惱	你的建議
50%	作業(yè)多，睡眠不足，壓力大	？
30%	父母不理解，缺乏交流
20%	活動少，體質(zhì)差

Our school has made a survey--- “Speak out your worries”. Here are the results.

Answer 1

Our school has made a survey — "Speak out your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day that they don’t have enough sleep. They feel stressed very much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents can’t understand them and are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we will try our best to improve our studies and we want to take more exercise to stay healthy as well.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表作文。要求同學(xué)們根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫一份調(diào)查結(jié)果匯報，要將表格內(nèi)容表述全面并根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫出你的建議。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：be strict with sb“對某人嚴(yán)厲”；get along well with“和某人合得來”；try one’s best to do sth“盡某人最大努力做某事”等等。在平時學(xué)習(xí)中牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。