Question

14．請(qǐng)以“My favorite teacher”為題，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文．標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．
提示 （短文須包含下列要點(diǎn)）：
（1）What subject does your favorite teacher teach？
（2）What does he/she look like？And how about his/her personal traits（性格）？
（3）Tell a story about how he/she helped you．
（4）What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future？
注意：短文中，老師的姓名請(qǐng)一律使用Mr Wang或Ms Wang，不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授學(xué)科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一個(gè)故事）Once my Englishwas reallypoor，Ihad no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要說(shuō)的話(huà)）when wemeetinthefuture，I will say“many thanks”to her．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，本文所給要點(diǎn)是幾個(gè)問(wèn)題，故動(dòng)筆前先要閱讀要點(diǎn)，找出問(wèn)題的答案．寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將問(wèn)題所涉及內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．可用句型有如：be strict with對(duì)…嚴(yán)格；be ready to do sth準(zhǔn)備做某事；in trouble處于困難中；try one’s best do to sth盡力做某事等

解答 My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授學(xué)科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一個(gè)故事）Once my English was really poor，I had no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要說(shuō)的話(huà)）when we meet in the future，I will say“many thanks”to her．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．