Question

短文寫(xiě)作：8%

為自己設(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)旅行計(jì)劃，要包括下列問(wèn)題：

1. 想去哪？為什么？

2. 想在那兒待幾天？

3. 怎么去？

4. 打算什么時(shí)候開(kāi)始旅行？

5. 在這次旅行期間，打算做些什么？

要求：意思連貫、通順，詞數(shù)在60—80之間。

提示詞語(yǔ)：countryside, air, food and vegetables, environment, fresh, quiet, poor, give, the school things ...

Make a travel plan

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Make a travel plan

Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. I will go to play three days. Because the air is fresh, the sky is blue, the river is clear. In the countryside, we can eat delicious food and green vegetables. The environment is quite good and quiet. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there. We are going to help the farmers there and do some farm work. We also want to plant many young trees to make the countryside more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其一般將來(lái)時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: Next week，I want to go to the countryside by bus. We are going to visit the Guang Ming Temple and have a picnic there.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。