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8．今天你到一家超市購(gòu)物，遇見一群美國(guó)游客，在交談中他們談到明天想去個(gè)園參觀，向你打聽該園的開放時(shí)間及景點(diǎn)等情況．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容向他們作個(gè)介紹，并順便提醒他們一些你認(rèn)為參觀時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

推介個(gè)園	=1．揚(yáng)州古城的東北，占地約2.3公頃，被譽(yù)為中國(guó)四大名園之一； =2．除非親眼所見，否則無(wú)法想象個(gè)園的四季假山與竹園風(fēng)情到底有多美； =3．出個(gè)園南門，便步入東關(guān)街…
開放時(shí)間	上午 7：30------下午 6：00
注意事項(xiàng)	…

要    求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．
參考詞匯：四季假山（Four Seasons Rockeries，公頃（hectare）．
 Hi，you guys!Welcome to Yangzhou．
    Throughout history，Yangzhou has be en famous for its gardens．The Ge Garden …
one of the top four famous gardens in China，lies in in the northeastern part of Yangzhou．It covers an area of about 2.3 hectares．It's famous for its varieties of bamboos and Four Seasons Rockeries．Unless you see them with your own eyes，you will have no idea how beautiful they are．When you walk out of its south gate，you will step onto the Dongguan Street，the only ancient street which survived from the Tang Dynasty in Yangzhou．It is a fantastic place to buy Yangzhou local products．
By the way，you'd better ask for English tourist guide services．Thus，you will know more about the history and culture of the garden and Yangzhou．I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹個(gè)園以及參觀時(shí)候的注意事項(xiàng)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．推介個(gè)園；揚(yáng)州古城的東北，占地約2.3公頃，被譽(yù)為中國(guó)四大名園之一；除非親眼所見，否則無(wú)法想象個(gè)園的四季假山與竹園風(fēng)情到底有多美；出個(gè)園南門，便步入東關(guān)街
2．開放時(shí)間；上午 7：30------下午 6：00
3．注意事項(xiàng)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be famous for 因…而著名
be regarded as 被視作…
make noise 制造噪音
by the way 順便說(shuō)一下
【高分句型】
1．You cannot imagine ①how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are ②unless you see them by youself．
①how引起的感嘆句how+adj/adv+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)，作為imagine的賓語(yǔ)．
②unless除非，引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
2．When you go out from the south gate of the Ge Garden，you can walk to the Dongguan Street．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．①By the way，I will tell you something ②you must remember during your visiting the Ge Garden
①by the way 順便說(shuō)一下
②省略了關(guān)系詞that的定語(yǔ)從句，that作為從句的賓語(yǔ)，故省略，先行詞是something．

解答 Hi，you guys!Welcome to Yangzhou．
Throughout history，Yangzhou has been famous for its gardens．The Ge Garden lies in the northeast of ancient Yangzhou city．It covers 2.3 hectares and it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China．You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by youself．【高分句型】When you go out from the south gate of the Ge Garden，you can walk to the Dongguan Street．【高分句型】You can buy some souvenirs there．（推介個(gè)園）
By the way，I will tell you something you must remember during your visiting the Ge Garden．【高分句型】You mustn't make noise in the garden or draw pictures on the wall．（注意事項(xiàng)）At last，you must remember the time of opening the Ge Garden．It is from 7：30a．m to 6：00p．m．（開放時(shí)間）
I hope you will enjoy your stay in Yangzhou!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．如：lies in位于，it is regarded as one of the four famous gardens in China被譽(yù)為中國(guó)四大名園之一；You cannot imagine how beautiful Four Seasons Rockeries are unless you see them by yourself，句型的運(yùn)用．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．