Question

英語(yǔ)課堂上，老師要求學(xué)生就“與人相處”的話題展開小組討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下你所在小組的討論結(jié)果，以“how to get well with others” 為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

Suggestions	Learn to share(分享) Respect(尊重) others Communicate with each other ……
My suggestions	……

注意：1.詞數(shù)80--100；
2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
3.文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。
How to get on well with others
                                                                                         
            

Answer 1

How to get on well with others
How to Get on Well with Others? Our class had a discussion about how to get on well with others in an English     lesson last week.We all gave our suggestions.First, we should learn to share.We should share our happiness as well as sadness with others. Second,We should respect others.That is very important.Only when we respect others can we gain respect from them.Third,communicate with others.Communication can get away the misunderstanding between the people.
In my opinion,besides the suggestions above,we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble.In addition,be kind and friendly.Always keep a smile on your face when talking with others

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: get on well with others和其他人相處得好；learn to share 學(xué)會(huì)分享；communicate with others與他人交流。we should get ready to help and show our love and care to them when they are in trouble.當(dāng)他身處困境的時(shí)候，我們應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備幫助并給他們我們的愛和關(guān)心。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.