Question

短文寫作。請分別根據以下要求作文。（12分）
“漳州市英語名師工作室”的老師們利用網絡組織了一場 “實現我們的中國夢”（To Realize Our China Dream）為主題的專題演講活動。請你根據你的具體情況填寫下列調查問卷，并結合調查問卷的任選四點內容寫一篇演講稿。（10分）
Questionnaire
Yes      No
Do you know much about Chinese culture?                (     )  (     )
Do you have any hobbies?                              (     )  (     )
Have you ever lied to others?                            (     )  (     )
Do you know something about traffic rules?                (     )  (     )
You have some good habits, don’t you?                    (     )  (     )
Did you read any books on how to protect the earth?         (     )  (     )
What will you do if someone is in trouble?
□Take care of her.      □Be kind to her.        □Be ready to help her.
要求：1. 語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范。
2. 詞數為80個詞左右。開頭結尾已給出，不列入詞數范圍。
3. 重點突出，可根據相關內容進行適當拓展。
My dear teachers and friends, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech about my ideas to achieve our China Dream. I hope all of us can get together to make our dream come true!
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Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

My dear teachers and friends, good morning! I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech about my ideas to achieve our China Dream. I hope all of us can get together to make our dream come true!
In my opinion, to learn much more knowledge about our country and Chinese culture is very important. China is a great country which has a long history. It is our motherland. So as a middle school student, we should study hard so that we can make great contributions to our country. And we must respect the elder including our parents and teachers. Try to be polite, such as saying “Good morning” when we meet them. Don’t tell lies. Remember, honesty is one of the most valuable qualities. Sometimes, it is always brave to acknowledge our mistakes. And we should try to be kind to others, and ready to help others when they are in trouble. What’s more, Obeying the rules such as the traffic rules and school rules is good for us. Don’t break the rules, or you’ll be in danger. Last but not least, we should learn to protect our environment so that we can be a greener person.
I believe if we can do the things above, our China Dream will come true in our future!
Thank you for listening!

試題分析：這是一篇根據所給要求寫一篇語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規范的作文。這就要求仔細分析所給要求，然后考慮清楚寫作思路。細節方面就要注意時態，語法以及銜接詞的運用等。
【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態運用正確，能夠把要求的內容敘述清楚，做到了首尾呼應，是一篇不錯的文章。