Question

最近學(xué)校要舉行一次“中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)”的討論。你是贊成者之一，認(rèn)為你們不應(yīng)該因噎廢食。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。

要求：詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。

注意：不要逐句翻譯，可加入一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章連貫。

內(nèi)容包括：

益處1、能獲得更多更新的知識(shí)；

2、發(fā)e-mail，方便與親友聊天；

3、閱讀各種書(shū)籍，自學(xué)外語(yǔ)；

4、欣賞音樂(lè)，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌等游戲，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，豐富我們的生活。

注意事項(xiàng)：1、長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)會(huì)影響身體健康和學(xué)習(xí)；

2、不要上不健康的網(wǎng)站。

3、要把電腦當(dāng)作學(xué)習(xí)工具，而不是玩具。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

In my opinion, the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all, the Internet is playing a more important part in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news at home and abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music, watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping on line. Besides, we can improve our ability to operate the computer. But we should not be given to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroyed. Besides, we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow, this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend. We can't throw away the apple because of the core。

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用提綱的給材料作文。要求介紹上網(wǎng)對(duì)中學(xué)生的好處和要注意的事情。材料給的比較詳細(xì)，但是在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可加入一些關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章連貫

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如，In my opinion, as much information as we can，Besides, But，Anyhow等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。