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2．據(jù)報(bào)道，中學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)有所下降．這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和重視．請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)生會(huì)以"EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!"為題寫一篇短文．為青少年體育鍛煉做做宣傳．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．學(xué)習(xí)固然重要，但體育鍛煉也很重要；
2．體育鍛煉能有助于我們的身體強(qiáng)健，精力充沛；
3．平時(shí)鍛煉方式有很多，如跑步，游泳，以及各式球類運(yùn)動(dòng)；
4．而如今青少年每天花在作業(yè)上的時(shí)間遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過(guò)了鍛煉身體的時(shí)間；
5．談?wù)勛约旱目捶ê徒ㄗh．
注意：
詞數(shù)60--80，書面表達(dá)的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱．不要逐條翻譯．
參考詞匯：1．energetic adj．精力充沛；  2．ball games n．球類運(yùn)動(dòng)
            EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!
Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hou r a day，keep illness away．"__________________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily如果我們不做任何運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們可能會(huì)感到疲倦，容易生病．這是由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，要遵循主將從現(xiàn)的原則；take exercise鍛煉．
高分句型二：There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games我們可以做很多運(yùn)動(dòng)，比如跑步，游泳和球類運(yùn)動(dòng)．這是一個(gè)there be句型，表示有；后面是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是sports，在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)，故可以省略．

解答 EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!
      Study is very important to us teenagers，but either study or work is based on strong body．So health is as important as study．（學(xué)習(xí)固然重要，但體育鍛煉也很重要）Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．（高分句型一）Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"（鍛煉身體的好處）     
     There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．（高分句型二）（鍛煉身體的方式）
     Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．（自己的看法和建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語(yǔ)，烘托謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．