Question

16．假如你叫李磊，你的英語外教Mr．Black 上個月回國工作了．請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件以示感謝．談談他對你有哪些幫助；在他的幫助下，你有哪些變化；你向他學到了哪些好的品質．
提示詞語：thank，remember，difficult，give up，encourage，make a great progress，kind…
提示問題：●Why do you thank him？
●How did your life/study change？
●What can you learn from him？
Dear Mr．Black，
                                                                       
Best wishes to you!
Yours，Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up一年前，我不擅長英語，所以我想放棄它．be good at是一個固定短語，表示擅長于；so表示結果，give up是一個固定短語，意思是放棄．
高分句型二：With your help，I have made great progress．在你的幫助下，我取得了很大的進步．with one's help是一個固定短語，意思是在某人的幫助下；make great progress是一個固定短語，意思是取得巨大進步．

解答 I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher（老師的好品質）．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．（高分句型一） You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress．（高分句型二） Now I am interested in English．（說明老師對我學習英語的幫助及我的變化） I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you（向老師學到的好品質）．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．（對老師的祝福）

點評 在寫作時，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．