Question

書面表達。（15分）

2012年, 東臺被評為 “江蘇文明城市 ”（Jiangsu Civilized City)。 你學校的English Club 正在舉辦以 “文明東臺，持續文明”為題的征文活動，請你根據以下的內容提示及要求寫一篇應征稿。

提示：◆尊敬師長，明禮誠信  ◆友善待人，樂于助人◆遵守交通，不闖紅燈◆保護環境，（寫2-3個例子）

要求：1）詞數90左右，不包含已給出的句子的詞數。2）內容完整，意思連貫，語句通順，書寫規范。

參考詞匯：respect(v.尊敬), polite, honest, obey(遵守), traffic lights, protect the environment, run a red light /to pass a red light /to disobey traffic lights(闖紅燈),spit（吐痰）。

Civilized Dongtai Going on

We are glad that Dongtai is now among the Jiangsu Civilized City. As a student, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                      

                                                                                    

In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad that Dongtai is now among the Nanjing civilized City. As a student, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all , we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it’s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn’t cross the road when the traffic lights are red. Last but not the least, it’s important and necessary to help protect the environment.For example, we shoudln’t spit here and there or throw litter carelessly. We’d better not pick flowers or step on the grass.

In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇以 “文明東臺，持續文明”為題的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態為一般現在時態，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。