Question

15．1．假如你是Tom，你向Mr．Li推薦Daniel做學生會主席．根據提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文．短文需包括所有要點，并可適當發揮．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
1自信，不怕當眾演講．聰明，如果盡力，能做好任何事情．常為學校活動出好點子．
2學習勤奮，成績優異．但謙虛，從不炫耀．
3最喜歡藍色，因為----，當別人生氣或激動時，他常能讓他們平靜下來．
4當別人很難做出決定時，他會給出許多的幫助．
Dear Mr．Li，
I'd like to recommend Daniel as our new chairperson of the Students'Union．
…
I think Daniel will be an excellent president of the Students'Union．
Yours
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He is even able to put up tents when we go camping．我們野營時他甚至會搭建帳篷．
when引導的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need他總是參加各種活動例如收集衣服和書給有需要的孩子．
in need作為后置定語，修飾children．

解答 Dear Mr．Li，
I'd like to recommend Daniel as our new chairperson of the Students'Union．
Daniel is a helpful boy．He often helps his neighbours fix computers．He always gives his seat to someone on the bus．（樂于助人）
He is also clever．He learns things quickly．He works hard on all the subjects．He is even able to put up tents when we go camping．【高分句型一】（聰明勤奮）
He is brave，too．One Sunday morning，he sat by the lake and read books as usual．Suddenly，he heard a girl calling for help．He jumped into the lake and saved the girl from the water．At last，he sent her home．（勇敢）Besides，he is very confident．He often says："we have confidence in ourselves and our abilities．"（自信） He is creative enough to come up new ideas．（主意多）He likes blue，because blue is the symbol of peace and it also makes people quiet．When others are angry，he always makes them happy．（喜歡的顏色）Daniel is polite and kind to others．He always says"hello"to his teachers．He thinks carefully when he works．He plans everything well．He often takes part in all kinds of activities like collecting clothes and books for the children in need．【高分句型二】（其他）
I think Daniel will be an excellent president of the Students'Union．
Yours
Tom．

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