Question

假如你叫張霖，暑假后就要進入高中(senior high school)學習。由于住校(live at school)與住在家里各有利弊，你想通過e-mail征求英國筆友Bill的意見。內(nèi)容應包括住宿、飲食、交通等幾個方面。
注意：1、字數(shù)要控制在100詞左右。
2、不要出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名。
3、開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總數(shù)。
Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.
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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I'm writing to ask for your advice.
I'm going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home. But
I can't decide because both have advantages and disadvantages.
At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with
5-6 students at school. Maybe I can't sleep well. It's a problem. Although I can have better food at home,
I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think it's great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home,
I'll have to ride to school. It's a waste of time and not safe.
It's so hard to make a decision. I'll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Zhang Lin

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。住校不住校各有利弊，你難以決定，所以你向你的筆友征求住不住校的的建議。文章主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時。
【亮點說明】這篇短文層次分名，先說明自己的困惑：不能就住校還是不住校做決定，然后說明自己對住不住校的看法，最后重申自己的問題，請求建議。這種結構安排使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。