Question

假如你是Jane, 你所在的學校每年在十月至十二月都會開展一系列的校園活動。請你根據下面的時間表用英語給你的同學Peter寫一封信，簡單介紹一下這些活動。
作文要求：
1．不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。
2．注意時態運用，可進行適當的拓展。
3．語句連貫，詞數80個左右。作文的開頭結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

活 動(Activities)	日 期
英語節(English Day )	十月十九日
學校旅行(School trip)	十月二十八日
藝術節(art festival)	十一月一日
足球賽(soccer game)	十一月二十日
籃球賽(basketball game)	十二月二日
圖書特賣活動(book sale)	十二月二十三日

Dear Peter,
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year.              
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Do you like these activities? Please join us!
Yours,
Jane

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
There are many activities in our school from October to December every year. October is a great month. The English Day is on October19 th. We must talk with our classmates in English at school. Our school trip is on October 28^th. I can play with my classmates! It’s really interesting! On November 1^st, we have an art festival. You like sports, right? The soccer game is on November 20^th, and the basketball game is on December 2^nd. We also have a book sale in our school library on Decemer 23^rd. You can buy many good books at very good prices. Do you like these activities? Please join us!
Yours,
Jane

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。同時注意書信的格式。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態，主語是第一人稱，注意時態語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】本文的格式正確，并且將提供的信息全面而自然的展現出來，并不是簡單的翻譯。在用詞方面更是恰當準確。用簡單的語言將信息完整的傳達出來。一些短語運用恰當。如：from……to, talk with, a book sale, join等等，學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.