Question

14．對于大家來說，寶貴的初中學習生涯已即將走過一半，在這段時間里，肯定有很多老師在學習和生活上給了你幫助和影響，請你以"the most beautiful teacher in my heart"為題寫一篇短文說說你心目中最美的老師，為什么他（她）是你心目中最美的老師，同時并表示對他（她）的感謝．
提示詞語：thank you，kind，forget，be in trouble，with the help of，stay in touch
要求：
1．表達清楚，語法正確，上下連貫；
2．詞數：80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
The history class which he taught was very interesting．他教的歷史課很有趣． which he taught was very interesting是一個定語從句，修飾先行詞class．
高分句型二
 he often helped us when we were in trouble．當我們有困難時，他經常幫助我們．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．

解答 The most beautiful teacher in my heart
 The most beautiful teacher in my heart is my  history teacher，Mr．Li【開篇點明主題】．He was a very kind teacher with thick glasses．The history class which he taught was very interesting【高分句型一，注意定語從句的使用】，he often helped us when we were in trouble．【高分句型二，注意時間狀語從句的使用】He always told us to study hard and tried our best to make a contribution torealizing our modern motherland．With the help of him，we we were good at history．【正文部分詳細介紹老師】He is so good a teacher that I will not forget him forever!【結尾緊扣主題】

點評 動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．