Question

內容提要：假設你是李磊，根據所給英文關鍵詞的提示，給你的美國朋友Jim 寫一封信，信的開頭與結尾已給出，介紹你是如何學習英語的。

關鍵詞：favorite subject, work hard, practise reading, speaking,listening, writing, keep on doing, remember words, listen to ... watch English videos, talk in English (寫作時，不必局限于所給的關鍵詞，可以根據自己的實際情況適當發揮)。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Jim,

How are you? Today I want to tell you about my English study. I'm interested in English because it's my favorite subject. I'm working hard at it now. You know, I practise listening, speaking, reading and writing everyday. But my spoken English is not so good. So I keep on practicing all the time. I remembered over 1,000 English words. In the evening, I watch English videos. I try to talk in English with my classmates or my English teacher. I still have some problems. I can't make sentences with new words. Would you please give me some help?

Best wishes!

Yours，

Lilei

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信作文。題目所給信息簡明扼要，要求明確，內容貼近學生學習實際，學生有較大的發揮空間。動筆前要認真審題，勾勒要點，并適當發揮。行文中要注意人稱、時態的變化及主謂一致問題。同時注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內容，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結構組織上很好地運用了書信作文的基本格式，文章自然流暢。同時，使用了一些常用句式和短語，如：be interested in、work hard at、practise doing sth、keep on doing 、all the time、try to do、Best wishes!等，這為文章增色不少。在學習中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：材料作文。