Question

上個(gè)星期天晚上，你和家人一起去看京劇。談?wù)勅ブ�前你的心情及看過(guò)之后的體會(huì)。詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。

提示詞語(yǔ)：look forward to ... , national opera, express Chinese culture, famous stories, facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting, have a nice evening ...

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Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...

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Answer 1

Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial painting, wonderful gesture and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people there. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.

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【亮點(diǎn)分析】本文要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，句中有很多有用的表達(dá)方式和句型，例如：I was looking forward to seeing it,我很期待去看。Look forward to doing sth.期待做某事；On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.在去看的前一天晚上，我太興奮了都沒(méi)有睡好。句型So…that…如此……以至于……。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文。