Question

20．假如你們班要舉行一次英語演講比賽，主題為"What do you want to be in the future？"．請用英語寫一篇演講稿，談談你理想的職業、原因及如何實現自己的理想．80詞左右，可適當發揮，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
Hello，everyone!
                                                 
What's your dream job？

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think teachers are very great我認為老師很偉大．
【高分句型二】
I will try my best to study in a good university to get a good education我將會盡力去一所好大學學習去獲得好的教育．
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

解答 Hello，everyone!
I want to be a teacher in a primary school．（夢想）First，I think teachers are very great．【高分句型一】They teach students lots of knowledge and how to be a useful person．Second，I like to stay with children．It can make me happy and relaxed．（為什么）
To be a good teacher，I'm going to study all the subjects very hard at school and read many kinds of books．I will try my best to study in a good university to get a good education【高分句型二】．（努力）
I'm sure my dream can come true one day．（確信）What's your dream job？

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