Question

書面表達(dá)(10分)

每個(gè)人都有自己人的小房間，請(qǐng)以My room 為題寫一篇小作文，介紹一下自己的房間。

要求：1、60字左右。2、字跡工整、語句通順。

3、使用適當(dāng)?shù)姆轿唤樵~。

My Room

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Answer 1

My Room

I have a new room.I have a bookcase, a chair, a desk, a table, and a bed in my small room. My hat is on the chair. My baseball is under the bed. My school ID card is on the table. My CDs are in my backpack. Oh, there is a picture of mine on the wall.

My room is very nice. I like it very much. Do you have your own room? Tell me!

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如My CDs are in my backpack. Oh, there is a picture of mine on the wall.等，and等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。