Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。(10
分)

Answer 1

One day, Li Ming met two old friends of his on the street. So they went to a restaurant to have dinner. They were so happy that they drank a lot of wine. After the dinner, Li Ming said goodbye to his friends and drove his car away. He was so drunk that he can’t see things clearly. Besides, he can’t drive the car well. Suddenly, he drove the car and hit a tree. He was badly hurt and was sent to the hospital. In hospital, a policeman told him that he shouldn’t drive a car after drinking wine. It was very dangerous. He would be punished. Li Ming realized his mistake and promised not to do that again.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，有四副圖畫(huà)，這篇短文寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵是看清圖片里的內(nèi)容，在理解上不能有偏差。所以我們首先要弄清楚圖片里的內(nèi)容，它主要講了一個(gè)什么故事，然后才能開(kāi)始寫(xiě)作。通過(guò)仔細(xì)觀察圖片我們可以知道，這幾張圖片反映的是一個(gè)人酒后開(kāi)車(chē)，最后出了事故這樣一件事。接下來(lái)我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把整個(gè)事情的過(guò)程敘述清楚、完整。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)該主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，所以要注意每句話中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式。在發(fā)揮想象力的同時(shí)，還要注意忠于原文的意思。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，這篇短文將圖片中所描述的事情完整、準(zhǔn)確的敘述了下來(lái)。短文中沒(méi)有遺漏一些細(xì)節(jié)，如圖片中的人物和朋友們喝酒后開(kāi)車(chē)離開(kāi)，后來(lái)撞到了一棵樹(shù)上，被送到了醫(yī)院，同時(shí)受到了警察的訓(xùn)斥，知道這樣做是不對(duì)的。這個(gè)過(guò)程描寫(xiě)得很清楚，準(zhǔn)確。在這篇短文中使用了一些較好的句型，如They were so happy that they drank a lot of wine、He was so drunk that he can’t see things clearly、He was badly hurt and was sent to the hospital、Li Ming realized his mistake and promised not to do that again.等。文中時(shí)態(tài)、人稱都符合要求，表達(dá)也比較流暢，是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。