Question

假如你是來自于美國的Jeff，現在在中國學習，請你給在美國的祖母寫一封信，介紹一下你在中國新結交的好朋友Wang Lin。

注意：

1. 所寫內容必須有如下介紹：

Wang Lin是個比我外向的人，他對我很友善，給了我很多幫助。

Wang Lin比我矮，但很喜歡運動，我們現在每周在一起打兩次籃球。

我比Wang Lin聰明一點，但Wang Lin比我用功很多。每次考試，我們都能取得好成績。

2. 開頭部分已寫好，你只需接著寫，內容可以適當補充和發揮。

3. 詞數：不少于75。

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend.

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Yours,

Jeff

 

Answer 1

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is a Chinese boy. He is more outgoing than me, and he is very friendly to me. At school, he often helps me a lot and I like him very much. Although he is shorter than me, he likes sports very much and his favorite sport is basketball. I like basketball, too. We play basketball twice a week. As for study, I think I am a little smarter than him, but he works much harder than me. Both of us can get good grades in every exam.

Yours,

Jeff

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要與好朋友王林的不同，全文主要用一般現在時態。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如more outgoing， is very friendly to，a lot ，twice a week，As for study， a little，Both of us 等短語；文中多次運用比較狀語如more outgoing than me, shorter than me，a little smarter than him；讓步狀語從句 Although he is shorter than me。文章層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。

考點：提綱作文。