Question

7．朋友就像好書，朋友就像一面鏡子．和真正的好朋友能夠分享一切喜怒哀樂．請以My True Friend為題介紹你的朋友．
要求：文中不能夠出現真實的人名地名．
用恰當的比較級描述．
語法正確，表達準確，80字左右．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I like to have friends who are different from me我喜歡擁有和我不同的朋友．
who are different from me作為定語從句，修飾friends．
【高分句型二】
Although we have some differences，we are good friends雖然我們有些不同，但是我們是好朋友．
although引導的讓步狀語從句．

解答 My True Friend
There is an old saying"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"So we should choose someone who truly treats us as a friend．In fact，I like to have friends who are different from me【高分句型一】．My true friend is Tom．In some ways we look the same，and in some ways we look different．We both have black eyes and black hair．We are both thin，but Tom is much thinner．he is taller，more outgoing than me．（外貌和性格）And he is really more hard-working than me．I am good at English but he does well in math．（學習）We like playing basketball．Both he and I like sports show．But I like watching cartoon films，she likes watching talk show．（愛好）I am lazier than him，He is never late for class，But I always get up late． I think differences are not important in a friendship．
 Although we have some differences，we are true friends．【高分句型二】Our friendship will last forever．

點評 能夠根據提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務．