Question

Bill 是我的筆友，他來(lái)自日本，現(xiàn)居住在上海。今年14歲。他喜歡中國(guó)和中國(guó)食物，他最喜歡的是電影和籃球。他的理想是作一名記者。他想去參觀長(zhǎng)城(the Great Wall)，他認(rèn)為那是一個(gè)可以玩得很開(kāi)心的地方。今天天氣晴朗，他和朋友們正在公園里做運(yùn)動(dòng)。
請(qǐng)綜合以上信息，以My pen pal 為題寫(xiě)一篇60字左右的短文。
My pen pal
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Answer 1

I have a pen pal named Bill , who comes from Japan and now lives in Shanghai. He is 14 years old. He likes China and Chinese food. What he likes best is films and basketball.
His dream is to become a reporter. He wants to the Great Wall. He thinks that it’s a good place to have fun. It’s Sunny today and he is doing exercise with his friends in the park. I like her very much!

解析這篇文章主要是就要點(diǎn)翻譯句子，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、還有時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。這題都是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。另外還要注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。Bill后面的謂語(yǔ)都是用單數(shù)。可以適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用些復(fù)合句，比如：I have a pen pal named Bill , who comes from Japan and now lives in Shanghai.這是定語(yǔ)從句。What he likes best is films and basketball.這句里有主語(yǔ)從句。