Question

17．假如你是Mike，你收到了來自中國的筆友李林的來信，在信里他向你傾訴學英語的苦惱，抱怨中國人為什么要學英語，請你給他回信告訴他學習英語的重要性并給出一些學習英語的建議，詞數：80詞左右，信的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear LiLin，
How are you？Thank you for your letter．English is very important in our lives．Lots of foreigners come to China．English is widely used and useful in the world．It's important for us to learn it well．
I began to study English at the age of nine．At the beginning，I was weak in it．With the help of my teacher and classmates，I have made great progress．I did a lot to improve my English．First，I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class．Second，I practiced listening and speaking a lot．I was not afraid of making mistakes．I also tried to read more English magazinesand stories．
I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us．I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think English is widely used and useful in the world我認為英語在全世界廣泛運用，也是很有用的．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
It's important for us to learn it well對于我們來說學好英語是重要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Dear LiLin，
How are you？Thank you for your letter．English is very important in our lives．Lots of foreigners come to China．English is widely used and useful in the world．【高分句型一】It's important for us to learn it well．【高分句型二】（英語的重要性）
I began to study English at the age of nine．At the beginning，I was weak in it．With the help of my teacher and classmates，I have made great progress．I did a lot to improve my English．（學習英語的經歷）First，I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class．Second，I practiced listening and speaking a lot．I was not afraid of making mistakes．I also tried to read more English magazines and stories．（具體方法）
I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us．I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class．

點評 首先要仔細審題，嚴格按照要求去寫作．其次要注意時態人稱的選擇；再次行文中要語句通順，注意上下句的銜接，用英語式的思維去組織每個句子，避免受漢語的影響．采用不同的句式，盡量避免重復．注意不要出現單詞，語法和時態等的錯誤．這樣的文章就是好文章