Question

7．發(fā)明改變了世界，改變了我們的生活．比如，電視和自行車給我們的生活帶來(lái)了許多變化和便利．請(qǐng)你以"inventions"為話題，根據(jù)提示寫一份報(bào)告，先介紹電視和自行車的用途，再發(fā)揮想象，說(shuō)說(shuō)你想發(fā)明的東西，并說(shuō)明其用途或發(fā)明的理由．
注意：1、報(bào)告應(yīng)包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；2、發(fā)明的東西可大可小，有其特殊用途即可；3、詞數(shù)不少于70字．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning everyone!Today I'm going to talk about inventions．
Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier．There are famous
inventions like TV and the bicycle．TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world．We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves．Besides，some learning
programs help us with our study．
The bicycle is very useful，too．We go to school or work by bike．It makes no pollution，which is good for our environment．What's more，bicycle riding is quite good for our health．It's cheap，too．
Though there have been many great inventions．I wish to invent a kind of pen to help us write more
quickly and neatly．When we have problems in doing homework，it will tell us how to solve them．
That's all．Thank you very much．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I wish to invent a kind of pen to help us write more quickly and neatly．我希望發(fā)明一種筆幫助我們更快更整潔地書寫．句子中wish to do sth表示希望做某事；help sb do sth表示幫著某人做某事．
②When we have problems in doing homework，it will tell us how to solve them．當(dāng)我們?cè)谧鲎鳂I(yè)有問(wèn)題時(shí)，它會(huì)告訴我們?nèi)绾谓鉀Q它們．句子中when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，have  problems in doing sth做某事有問(wèn)題．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
      Today，I'm going to talk about inventions．（引出話題）
      Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier．There are famous inventions like TV and the bicycle．TV provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world．We watch entertainment programs to relax ourselves．Besides，some learning programs help us with our study．（介紹電視的用途）
      The bicycle is very useful，too．We go to school or work by bike．It makes no pollution，which is good for our environment．What's more，bicycle riding is quite good for our health．It's cheap，too．（介紹自行車的用途）
      Though there have been many great inventions．I wish to invent a kind of pen to help us write more quickly and neatly（高分句型）．When we have problems in doing homework，it will tell us how to solve them（高分句型）．（我想發(fā)明的東西、用途或發(fā)明的理由．）
      That's all．Thank you very much．（結(jié)束語(yǔ)）

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