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假如你看到或聽到下面這則消息，請以李華的名義，給你的英國筆友Davy發一封電子郵件，告訴他這個感人的故事及你的感受。

河北農業大學93級學生李寶元因病于1996年去世。他所在班級的26名同學決定共同幫助李寶元的父母。十五年來，他們寄出15張匯敖羊和56封信。

提示：(1) Tell him the true story.
(2) Talk about how you feel about it.
(3) Say something about what you can learn from it.
要求：
（1）文稿須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。
（2）電子郵件的開頭和結尾己給出，不計入總詞數。
（3）詞數：60?80個。
參考詞匯：money order (匯款單), go on, be moved (感動), be full of love
I'd like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan. a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily,
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Answer 1

Possible version
Hi Davy,
I’d like to tell you a true story. Li Baoyuan, a student of Hebei Agricultural University came from a poor family. Unluckily, he became ill and died in 1996. However, all his 26 classmates decided to help Baoyuan’s parents. In the past fifteen years, they’ve sent 15 money orders and 56 letters to his parents. And their true love is still going on...I’m really moved. As a student, I should learn from them and try to help others. If everyone would like to do that, the whole world will be full of love!
What do you think of it?
Please write soon!
Li Hua

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