Question

書面表達（15分）

Jackson是澳大利亞的一名游客，春節期間來中國進行鄉村游。他在觀賞鄉村美景的同時，發現人們在街道或店鋪前后隨意丟垃圾，嚴重影響周圍的環境。于是他給當地的Overseas Chinese newspaper（華僑報）寫了一封倡議書，呼吁當地人們能夠保持衛生干凈整潔。假設你是Jackson，請你寫一篇80詞左右的倡議書。倡議書的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear my friends,

I’m a tourist from Australia. ________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Yours sincerely,

Jackson

Dear my friends,

I’m a tourist from Australia. I was deeply attracted by the beautiful scenery in your hometown during the Spring Festival. But I saw much trash in the street or at the corner of the shop. It’s harmful to people’s bodies. People may be sick because of this.

Why not keep the street clean and tidy? Good environment needs your help. Would you please put the trash in the right place? If I can’t find the trash here, everyone will feel comfortable and I’ll tell more persons to visit your town. They’ll feel fun, too.

Let’s go and get ride of the trash. Let’s try our best to make everyone live in a clean and tidy place.

Yours sincerely,

Jackson

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一封倡議書。寫作前先擬出提綱，寫出有關的短語和固定表達備用。內容要點主要包括：看到的現象和倡議人們怎樣做。

【亮點說明】本文做到了包含所有內容要點，語句通順，標點符號運用正確。在80詞左右的篇幅中，恰當地運用了一些短語和句式，如why not…?，let sb. do等。

考點：話題作文。