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4．近日，隨著《中國足球改革總體方案》的出臺，"足球進校園"已成為社會熱議的話題．假設你是張偉，你的好友王明想加入校足球隊，但是他的父親認為踢足球會影響學習．請你根據以下提示給王明的父親寫一封信，幫助王明說服他的父親．
關鍵詞提示：good for health； serious about； more confident； encourage him； team effort； communicate…with； make more friends； decide by himself
注意：1．文中應包含所有提供的信息，并進行適當拓展；
2．詞數：80-100（給出的文章開頭供選擇使用，不計入總詞數）．
Dear Uncle Wang，
I am Zhang Wei，a friend of Wang Ming．I heard that you didn't agree Wang Ming to join the school soccer team and thought it would have a bad influence on his study．However，I don't think so．Here are my reasons．
                                                     
I'm looking forward to your reply．Thanks so much．
Yours，
Zhang Wei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：Firstly，playing soccer is good for his health and health is more important than grades首先，踢足球對他的健康有好處，健康比成績更重要．這是一個由動名詞充當主語的句子，be good for是一個固定短語，意思是對…有好處，后面是一個比較級．
高分句型二：If he is allowed to do what he likes，he will be more confident．It will also encourage him to work hard in study如果他被允許做自己喜歡做的事，他會更加自信，這也會鼓勵他努力學習．這是一個由if引導的條件狀語從句，要遵循主將從現的原則．

解答 Dear Uncle Wang，
I am Zhang Wei，a friend of Wang Ming．I heard that you didn't agree Wang Ming to join the school soccer team and thought it would have a bad influence on his study．However，I do not think so．Here are my reasons．
Firstly，playing soccer is good for his health and health is more important than grades（高分句型一）．Secondly，he's serious about playing soccer．If he is allowed to do what he likes，he will be more confident．It will also encourage him to work hard in study（高分句型二）．Last but not least，soccer is about team effort．Joining soccer team is a chance to communicate more with people and make more friends，which will help him a lot in the future．（分析原因）
Wang Ming has grown up now，so he can get a chance to decide by himself．（得出結論）
I'm looking forward to your reply．Thanks so much．
Yours，
Zhang Wei

點評 在寫作時，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．