Question

假設你和你們班的同學上周去郊游了，請根據下表的內容寫一篇80詞左右的短文來介紹一下你們的郊游。

活動項目	A field trip
活動時間	Sunday
活動地點	West Lake
交通方式	By bike
活動內容	See animals, go boating, have a picnic, photos, return
活動感受	Tired, glad

 

Answer 1

Last Sunday my classmates and I went on a field trip to West Lake. We met at our school gate early in the morning, and set off at 8 o’clock. All of us went there by bike. First we went to the zoo to see the animals. Then we went boating. At lunch time, we took our food and had a picnic. We took many beautiful photos.
When we returned home, we all felt very tired, but we were glad that we had a good day.

試題分析：本文所給材料較為簡略，要求介紹自己的一次郊游活動。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態為一般過去態，注意時態和時間狀語的搭配。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫出關鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系，注意序數詞和連接詞的使用。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。