Question

2012年春節就要到了，（1月19日）你和同學到敬老院和那兒的老人度過了一個快樂的上午，請用英語寫一篇80詞左右的日記，介紹一下你們那天上午活動的情況。
日記的內容應包括以下要點：
1. 來回的時間及方式；
2. 活動內容：掃地，洗衣，娛樂……；
3. 活動感受：很累但很愉快；要尊重和關心老人。
參考詞匯： old people’s home 敬老院  respect  vt．尊重
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Answer 1

The Spring Festival is coming. It was seven o’clock in the morning. Four of my friends and I got together at the school gate and went to the nearest old people’s home called Wulin Old People’s Home to visit the old people there. It’s so near that we went there on foot. That is one of our winter vacation’s volunteer activities. Yesterday we went shopping to buy nice snacks like cakes and candies for the old people.
When we got there, we sent our gifts to them first. They looked so happy. After that, we cleaned their rooms and washed their clothes. Also, to make them happier and more relaxed, we acted for them, singing and dancing. Later we had a talk with them and got them so excited all the time. It took us the whole morning to be with them.  As teenagers, we should learn to care about others and respecting old people is our duty. We felt tired when we left, but I think it’s a special day.
    What a good day!

解析這篇作文是日記題材，根據要點提示，要包括1. 來回的時間及方式；2. 活動內容， 3. 活動感受：圍繞要點進行描寫，也可以適當增減，還要注意時態的運用，日記主要用過去時 ，另外還要注意運用一些復雜的句型，例如：It’s so near that we went there on foot.that引導的是結果狀語從句，to make them happier and more relaxed, we acted for them, singing and dancing.不定式做得是目的狀語，現在分詞做得是伴隨狀語。