Question

11．朋友是人生中的一大財富，請你根據(jù)以下的寫作要點寫一篇短文，介紹你最好的朋友Sally，同時分享一下你們維護(hù)彼此間友誼的心得．詞數(shù)80個左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)．
寫作要點：Sally：1．外貌：一雙大眼睛，長長的頭發(fā)，和我一樣高．
2．性格：待人友好，臉上經(jīng)常帶著微笑．
3．興趣愛好：喜歡唱歌跳舞（和我一樣）
維護(hù)友誼的心得：1．每天一起騎自行車上學(xué)，周末一起到圖書館看書．
2．下課后經(jīng)常一起聊天，分享快樂和煩惱．       3．彼此誠實．
Sally is my best friends．We met at a party 10years ago．                                       ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Just like me，she is interested in singing and dancing．就像我一樣，她對唱歌、跳舞感興趣．
be interested in對…感興趣；just like…就像…
【高分句型二】
After class，we often chat together and share many interesting things we meet．下課后，我們經(jīng)常一起聊天彼此分享遇到的很多有趣的事情．
we meet定語從句的應(yīng)用；chat together一起聊天

解答 Sally is my best friend．We met at a party 10 years ago．She is 13 years old．Her eyes are so big and bright．She has long hair．She is as tall as me．She is friendly to others and there is always smile on her face．（外貌特征）Just like me，she is interested in singing and dancing．【高分句型一】And she likes playing computer games too．She has a healthy life style．She often exercises and she seldom has hamburgers and coke．She thinks they are bad for her health．（習(xí)慣愛好和生活方式）
We are in the same school but not in the same class．We go to school by bike every day．On Monday，we go to the library together．After class，we often chat together and share many interesting  things we meet．【高分句型二】We are honest to each other．As a student，she is busy with her study．She is good at English and I am good at Chinese．So we can help each other．（我們的相處）
I hope we are good friends for ever．（美好愿望）

點評 能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)．