Question

15．期末考試來臨，很多學(xué)生為了取得好成績，學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)是這樣的

請根據(jù)下面的圖片給出建議：

請根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容，首先對學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)生活狀態(tài)進行描述，然后根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容給出合理的建議．
The end-of-year exam is coming，                                                

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
I think it is harmful to our health and we can't study well．我認(rèn)為這對我們的健康是有害的，我們不能學(xué)習(xí)好．  這是一個賓語從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
 高分句型二
  If we have enough sleep at night，we can study better next day．如果我們有足夠的睡眠，第二天我們可以更好的學(xué)習(xí)．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 The end-of-year exam is coming．Lots of students go to bed very late in order to go over lessons．But next day，they feel sleepy in class．I think it is harmful to our health and we can't study well【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】．【要點二，給出建議】．These are my suggestions．First，we can listen to music in free time．Music can make us relaxed．Second，why don't we go to bed early．If we have enough sleep at night，we can study better next day【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．Third，it is a good idea to go for a run in the morning．It can make us healthy and active．I think health is the most important．So I think we should keep healthy and feel relaxed first，and then we can work hard．【要點一，期末考試來臨，學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．