Question

5．A  My _________ Rules把題目補充完成并寫一篇短文．
B 星期天你和你的朋友們去動物園玩，動物園里有許多動物，人們在做著不同的事情，請以 A visit to zoo 為題寫一篇短文
要求：1、不少于60字的短文，分值相同．
2、注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規范．
3、不得使用真實姓名，否則以零分計算．如需使用姓名，請以Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名統一用Xinhua Middle school．

Answer 1

分析 A篇：【高分句型一】
I like some rules because they are helpful我喜歡一些規則因為他們有用．
because引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Besides，helping mother do chores makes her happy另外，幫助媽媽做家務能讓她開心．
動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞用單數．
B篇：【高分句型一】
How crowed the zoo was!動物園多么熱鬧啊！
how+adj+主語+謂語！感嘆句的使用
【高分句型二】
We had a good time today!我們玩的多開心啊
have a good day玩的開心．

解答 My Family Rules
There are many rules in my family．
I like some rules because they are helpful．【高分句型一】For example，I have to clean my bedroom every day．I think it's a good rule．On the one hand，children should be educated to take care of ourselves from a young age．On the other hand，it is comfortable and relaxing for us to sleep in a clean bedroom．Besides，helping mother do chores makes her happy（喜歡的規則）．【高分句型二】
However，there are some terrible rules which make me unhappy．One of them is that I can't have my own hobbies．In my opinion，I think parents should support their children's dreams．That's because dreams can make children work hard and full of energy．What's more，I am not allowed to watch TV before finishing my homework on weekdays．I know we students feel tired after a day's study．I think parents should allow us to watch TV for a while when we get home．This can help us relax ourselves and it is also easier for us to pay attention to our homework．（不喜歡的規則）
All in all．my parents make these rules to help me be better，but some of my family rules are too strict．I think they should be changed！

A trip to the zoo 
It was a fine day and the sun was bright．I visited the WenZhou zoo with my family．（天氣和游玩地點和人物）
We started at nine．After an hour we went to the zoo by bus．How crowed the zoo was!：【高分句型一】We could see students．villagers，workers and so on everywhere．Most of them were young parents with their children．（看到的人）
There are hundreds of different kinds of animals in it，Elephants，bears，lions，monkeys and beautiful birds．Among them monkeys were children's favourits．They jumped up and down，begged for food and ate something in the corner．Sometimes they even made faces．The elephants had big noses and big ears and they were kind to people．Pandas with good manners，were very friendly and polite to visitors．（描述動物）
We had a good time today!【高分句型二】

點評 注意題目要求，注意緊扣文章主題，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、詞組及句型，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．