Question

書面表達（滿分20分）將短文寫在答題卷指定的區域內。

你班計劃舉行一次以“The best present”為話題的英文主題班會課，老師要求每位同學寫一篇短文，分享各自心目中的“最好禮物”，內容包括以下幾個方面：

·你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么；

·禮物背后的小故事；

·該禮物的意義或啟示。

The best present

What's the best present in my eyes?

 

 

 

注意：1．詞數80。短文要點表達不分先后，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數：

2．短文中不要出現具體的學校姓名和人名。

 

Answer 1

What’s the best presents in my eyes? It’s a hand-made calendar.

My best friend Jane gave it to me on my 14th birthday. Jane made it by herself. On each page of the calender, there’s a picture of Jane and me with some words. She eirher encourages me or tells me how she feels about our friendship .Whatever I look at the calendar .I’m touched by something warm .

This present is a memory of the wonderful time we spend together . I will keep this special gift forever.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如Jane made it by herself. On each page of the calender, there’s a picture of Jane and me with some words. She eirher encourages me or tells me how she feels about our friendship .Whatever I look at the calendar .I’m touched by something warm .等.

考點：話題作文